good concept but needs some work
the story was a pretty cool story and people that don't understand it are stupid but...
-the voices are horrible, the old lady and the girl sound like guys
-the girl is too skinny, she should be drawn with more curves and not like a guy
-it would have been an awsome story if the whole house was haunted with crazy weird stuff, and when the old lady is about to attack the girl the girl goes back in the house and deals with all this spooky stuff and she almost escapes but the old lady ends up getting her at the end...
anyways good first newgrounds flash, but needs work